dp challenge fifty word inspiration: 50 times (inspired by “regret”)

fifty times

head hurts. 5 am. streaks of dawn.

almost stranger. clothes scattered.

images flash. bar. wine. swaying. music.

laughing. walking. surf. cold against hot. dress clings.

head cracks. tangled sheets. i sit up. water. clothes. home.

soft kisses on my back.

strong arm. gentle. pulls me

back down.

can’t escape addictions.

my inspiration for dp challenge: “Regret“ by A Lady in Waiting. Waking up alone; waking up with strangers – both empty feelings offering no comfort.

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4 thoughts on “dp challenge fifty word inspiration: 50 times (inspired by “regret”)

I like first person narratives.

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